I do have some comments/feedback on your blog but you may not like it.
Blogs are not really professional writing. They are something personal so I don't know how relevant my feedback is...
Here goes...
First of all, the background.
I find the giant out of center "G" to be bright, a bit distracting and overwhelming.
The stadium background used here on the forum is all one color and it's easy on the eyes.
I find your writing to be too rambling. I don't see a train of thought staying on the same track.
You seem to get distracted.
(Again, since this is a personal blog I don't know if that matters or not.)
If I were writing this, I would break it down into categories:
Packers offense
Packers defense
How the Packers played over all.
Other observations and opinions.
Same thing for the opposing team.
The Ups/Downs is a good idea but I would be interested in reading like a line or two on your choices.
Like why are turnovers a "Down" for the Pack since they won the game?
Also, everything I read on your blog I feel like I could read/find elsewhere.
Somehow try and put in things that are unique.
Play around with words a bit more.
You don't have access to a press conference or the locker room, do you?
Maybe you can find a small tidbit on the web here or there that may fit in.
Or watch post game interviews or press conferences which is on the Packers website.
Overall, I think that you have good ideas and observations of who did what.
I just have a hard time understanding what you mean or get lost in your jumble of words.
Know or have an idea of what is really relevant.
We don't really need to know about Gabe Carimi, do we?
The challenge of writers is to think of themselves as the reader and to write to keep it interesting for the reader.
You gotta hook me in with your first few sentences and keep me hooked.
At this point, I don't feel that way. I can leave the page before reading it all the way through.
You don't want me or any other readers to do that, do you?
So find a style that will keep the reader in and with it to the end.
Learning how to edit, edit, edit and edit again your own work is a major component to writing.
Keep practicing, keep working on it and it will get better.
You can take or leave all or any of my advice.